Below is a short and concise - but hopefully useful outline on how to write a script. It is by no means comprehensive and is a mish mash of various teachers' and theorists' ideas and work. See this as a simple crash course. Hope it helps. Here we go...
Writing
a script (especially a feature length one) is not as easy as many
seem to believe it is. Compared to the novel or traditional prose,
the script is a unique animal. Ultimately most see a script as
not a thing in itself but rather like an architect's plan for a
building. In the same way that a building's plans are not the building
itself - the script is ultimately an aspiration towards making
a film. However increasingly scriptwriting is being considered
by some as an art unto itself and one that is often read and appreciated
regardless of whether it is produced or not.
There
are a considerable amount of rules and conventions you are expected
to follow when writing a script. Some are annoying and some are
downright stupid. But if you want to have your script read you
should try and follow as many of these conventions as possible.
Script readers, commissioning editors and producers who have an
intimidating pile of scripts on their desk tend to first throw "unconventionally"
formatted and styled scripts straight into the dustbin without even
reading them. To them this is a time saving way of weeding out the
amateurs from the professionals or serious writers. Never make it
obvious you're new to the game - even if you are.
Many
of these conventions are largely based on Classic Hollywood Realism
- the style of the vast majority of American films. But even if
your script is to be the ultimate surreal, Dadaist, art-house experience,
conventional wisdom tell us that it's nevertheless useful to learn
these "rules" anyway. The logic is that you've got to know the
rules before you can subvert them.
THE PLOT
The
first thing to do is to work out what your script is going to be
about. This is your business so figure it out yourself. (Although
bear in mind what is written below because it does impact in the
type or idea you will want to develop). Then you need to create
a plot - i.e. basically what happens in your story and in what
order.
The
traditional Hollywood script plot structure is often called the
three-act structure. Another way of looking at it is what I call
the "balance-imbalance-balance" concept. These concepts work pretty
much the same - focusing primarily on a central character. The
Balance/Imbalance/Balance structure works in the following way.
(We'll call our central character
"X").
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1
- Balance: This is the initial state of your main
character: X is a content dog trainer living with her
dog Shoop. She avoids men because of previous affairs gone
sour.
2
- Imbalance: A challenge or obstacle is foisted
onto our hero which she undertakes to do something about.
This changes her life: Shoop is stolen by a rival
dog training company. Lonely and her spirits low, X spends
her time searching for Shoop. She begins to lose customers
as a result. Along the way she meets a helpful, sensitive
policeman with buns of steel who embarks on the dog searching
journey with her. Eventually she and Mr Buns of Steel
track down Shoop and rescue the canine.
3
- Balance: Things are restored back to order but
with something gained: Having rescued the dog, X returns
to her life of contented dog training now with the addition
of a well hung policeman in her bed. She has also overcome
her fear of taking romantic risks. Together with the help
of her beau her business has taken off like never before. Our
hero has learnt something and gained from the experience.
In other words, she has developed. |
The
most dramatic elements occur in the "imbalance" section. The challenge
and what our hero does to overcome it is the "meat on the bones"
of our story.
If
I were to ask what X's primary challenge is, you might say that
it is to find her dog. I might disagree and say that her primary
goal is actually to overcome her loneliness and fear of men. In
this way scripts can have different levels of meaning.
X's
story could be a comedy, a serious drama and even a feminist comment
on the way women are expected to conform to patriarchal society
in which life without a man is seen as meaningless. It's your choice.
Now
how does the plot become a script? Follow the easy steps below.
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STEP
ONE
Clearly write out your concept in a couple of lines: eg: "This
movie is about "X, a happy dog trainer whose life is thrown
into disarray when her faithful doggy companion Shoop is
abducted by a rival dog training company." This sets out
what your story is about as well as who your primary characters
are. You should also try and figure out if this will be
a comedy, a drama or horror story. This is called the "genre" of
the film. (Producers need to know this or they get very
confused.) However today we see more and more mixing of
genres in the same film. No dialogue should be added until
STEP SEVEN
STEP
TWO
Write a paragraph outlining the story in a little more
detail - this time adding in a few more characters and
important events. Get a stronger feeling for how the
thing will play out. We find out X has actually been
rather lonely, we learn that there's a hot policeman
in there too and there's a climatic shootout towards
the end when Shoop is rescued. One could call this paragraph
a short synopsis of your story.
STEP
THREE
Write a longer outline of your plot. Depending on you,
this can be anything from two to twenty pages. (You can
also break this step into more steps and write increasingly
longer outlines before proceeding to Step Four.). This
pretty much establishes the basics of your plot and many
of the twists and turns that may take place. Some also
call this the "beats" of your script. You can add in stuff
about the bad guys, who they are and their motivation for
their actions.
STEP
FOUR
Take your long outline and begin to break it up into one-or-two
line paragraphs. Each paragraph should be a particular
unique event. Eg:
What
once was:
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"X
is woken up in the morning by Shoop's long tongue
in her face. Later X drives to her dog-training
school with Shoop panting in the back." |
Becomes:
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Paragraph
one: X is woken up in the morning by Shoop's
long tongue licking her face.
Paragraph
two. X drives to her dog training school with
Shoop panting in the back. |
STEP
FIVE
Fill in more paragraphs to make the story flow well and
add any other paragraphs needed to fill out the story
and expand elements that need it. The paragraphs should
include more detailed actions on how things happen.
STEP
SIX
Turn these paragraphs into scenes. The concept of a scene
is very difficult to explain and almost needs to be intuitively
understood. I've never seen an adequate explanation or
definition to-date. It helps a great deal to read as many
scripts as possible to get a feeling for this. Nevertheless,
roughly, a scene is an event that happens in a unique place
and time. E.g. The paragraph description:
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Paragraph
Sixty Five X arrives at the factory and after
looking around discovers Shoop's dog leash in
the bathroom. |
Could
be broken down into:
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EXT.
ABANDONED FACTORY. DAY X looks up at the front
of the abandoned factory. A sign atop reads "NUWARE
TILES". X walks up to the front door and opens
it.
INT.
ABANDONED FACTORY FLOOR. DAY Walking through
the dark factory building it becomes clear
that there is no-one here anymore. Rubble and
trash are strewn all over the floor.
INT.
ABANDONED FACTORY TOILET. DAY X opens the door
to a filthy toilet and looks in. About to walk
away she sees something. A dog's leash. Bending
down she picks it up and realises that it is
Shoop's leash. |
INT/EXT:
This refers to the location of the scene. If it is inside
it is INT (for interior); if it is set outside it is
EXT (for exterior). This should be followed by the location
e.g. ABANDONED WAREHOUSE.
DAY/NIGHT:
This refers to wether the scene occurs in the day or
night. This follows the location.
STEP
SEVEN
Start filling in dialogue as well as more detail under
each scene. You should have a first draft completed by
the end of this process.
STEP
EIGHT, NINE, TEN, ELEVEN etc... There's a corny
but valuable saying about writing that goes: "Writing
is not about writing - but about re-writing". The first
draft will almost always be shit. It's in the refining,
re-writing, re-plotting and fine-tuning that great
scripts get made. Congratulations - you've written
a script! Now wasn't that fun? |
OTHER HANDY HINTS
Format
In order to gauge more or less how long a film a script will
make (very useful for producers), there are certain standards
in formatting. Avoid these at your own risk. Americans especially
are very rigid about this. These standards allow us to measure
a script's length by saying that: "a page of script equals roughly
a minute of screen time". This is a very rough guide (often action
films scripts are short but take longer on screen than a dialogue
based script) and not to be completely trusted.
Font
You should use Courier (or New Courier) Size 12. This is a fixed-width
font, which many believe makes it easier to read. You'll be surprised
how picky some readers are about this.
Length
Should fall between 90 to 120 pages. Anything longer and your chances
of being read begin to diminish. Dumb huh?
Numbering
Avoid numbering scenes unless it is a shooting script which will
only be seen by yourself or when actually shootingthe film. Script
readers don't like them.
Layout
A script layout should look something like this. Some will demand
exact measured layouts but few are very sticky about exact distances
from margins etc. (Note that it is difficult to display exact
layouts on web browsers - this is only a rough guide.)
Dialogue
This one is a toughie. It's very hard to teach dialogue. One has
to develop an ear for the way people really speak and not how
we think they speak. Listen to people from various backgrounds
and in various situations talk as often as you can. You'll
probably notice that people are not very eloquent in general.
They don't express themselves very well vocally and a great
deal of what is NOT said is just as important (often more so)
than what is said. Bring these thoughts to your scriptwriting
process. And again read lots of scripts and watch many films
to become more sensitive to dialogue.
An
important thing to remember is that scripts are the basis of the
visual medium of film. An old adage is: never say what you can
show instead. In other words if a character is angry don't have
her say
"I'm angry!", show it to us. E.g. have her smash a window with a
chair instead.
Characters
There is almost always a central character in a Hollywood movie.
That is because Hollywood films work on the basis of the audience
being able to identify with a character and his or her experiences.
More than one central character tends to confuse the viewers
(at least according to many studio execs).
Characters
are expected to be three dimensional and rounded. By that it is
meant that we should get a sense of their history and how it has
affected them as well as understanding why they do what they do
(usually called Motivation). (E.g. X avoids men because of a previous
heartbreaking episode). This is based on the idea that we do things
for knowable reasons. Modern psychology came up with this somewhat
naïve notion. However we rarely actually have access to the
full reasons why we, others (or ourselves) do what we do. Nevertheless
Hollywood believes otherwise.
This
convention often leads to some awfully contrived scenes in which
characters reveal really corny back-stories and traumatic past
events. This is also called "exposition" and is very difficult
to write without being obvious or corny. Exposition should happen
organically and without the audience realising it. Some filmmakers
such as David Cronenberg don't allow us to get close to their characters
and we rarely know why they do things except for the obvious. Unlike
in most Hollywood films we are not participants in Cronenberg's
films - but voyeurs watching the action from the outside.
Nevertheless
it often helps to create back-stories for your characters. These
are basically histories for your characters - their life experiences,
social and economic background etc. This doesn't have to all be
obviously present in the script but helps to craft more real characters.
Part
of having a three dimensional character is that we see him or her
develop across the course of the script. They should change in
front of our very eyes. Again remember these are all conventions
for a conventional style of film.
Camera
Directions
It's usually not appreciated that you include camera movements in
your scripts. There are ways of getting around this in sticky situations.
Sometimes it can't be avoided. Tarantino's scripts on the other hand
are full of camera directions. If the script is going to be pitched
to outside producers and script-readers try and avoid it. If you
are going to direct the thing yourself than go ahead and put them
in.
The
most useful advice I can give however is to read as many scripts
you can lay your hands on - either on the Internet or at your local
bookstore.
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